Was it my intuition, are you saying what I hoped you say?
My imagination has been a source of pleasure as much as it’s been a source of my pain.
Only in my dreams, have you been there.
Silently encouraging me to let my feelings show.
Planting the seeds; standing there watching as hope begins to grow.
Awake, I’ve always been afraid to let my feelings show.
I wanted to open up to you, but kept it to myself instead
The boldness was only present inside my head.
Awake I was filled with dread.
The vibrations of your voice
Sends sensations throughout my core;
Creating special tempos that have me screaming for more.
More you…
More time…more opportunities to make this real
Let me show you how your touches make me feel.
The desire for your nearness…
Burned a hole within my heart
Your hand stroking my hair,
The soft, smooth motions of your embraces
Left ambers burning softly….
I longed to hear the words you spoke; they burn me to my core
I’m longing to hear more…
BEAUTIFUL!!! I LOVE IT!!! it's full of so much emotions. You really know how to use words. loving your writing.
That's what I'm talking bout that's how u reply to a poem so deep and emotional, and how you tied it in with what I wrote mad alot of since “More time…more opportunities to make this real
Let me show you how your touches make me feel.” wow
I would reply with “the time is everlasting and the oppertunies are endless this is so real so let your self feel so I can here how my touches make you feel!!!” folks don't know words can express a feeling that's unknown unless experienced if u kno what im trying to say…. You good at expressing ur self now it's time for u to write one so I can response….. Love it!!!!
Thank you, both of you!! I really like what you have to say about the writing. T- I know what you're saying about the expressing feelings through words. Lately, I feel that I have alot to say……..